- Sarah swings her baseball bat a little too hard…….
- Timmy saw a shadow out of the corner of his eye……
- Mindy holds her script with trembling hands…..
- The child looks at Mandy with big innocent eyes….
- James glance around frantically……
- Kip dashes towards the door….
- Owen’s alarm clocks ring…..
- Looking at the bill, Erin gasps…..
- Minnie looks at the stranger with a horrified look….
- Audrey felt victorious….
- Matt types on his laptop intently….
- Time is running out for Perry….
Openers
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Your openers are all too general with too many possibilities for stories. I know I asked for possibility for stories but then again, too much is never a good thing. You need to strike a balance between being quite specific but still leaving room for possibility – that’s the art of a good opener.
Comment by theredpants — May 11, 2009 @ 7:05 am