Story 1
Looking at my laptop, I wondered what I should type for my assignment. I am going to make it a good story where everyone will cry about. I love to touch people’s hearts with my words! In the end, I surfed the Internet. Procrastination is going to ruin my future…
Story 2
She was always smiling. Dress up is one of her favourite games. She hates it when I play hide and seek with her because I would sometimes forget to find her. She loves to make me happy. She is my one and only friend. She’s my one and only Emily.
Story 3
Mindy loves sweets! Chocolate cake with strawberries is her favourite! I love sweets too! Chocolate cake is my favourite too, but I hate strawberries! So I threw away the strawberries on Mindy’s cake. Mindy is still angry with me. We haven’t spoke to each other for years and never will…
Story 4
Look at him! Sitting on that chair with a cigarette in a hand and the soccer-betting channel on! Doing all this while his wife is working and doing all the chores! Just you wait, I will be the one laughing at you when you lose everything precious to you, freeloader!
Story 5
Make up on every inch of her face. ‘Why am I doing this? For who am I doing this?’ Rachel thought. ‘For others’ happiness? To be judged? What about my happiness?’ There’s a never-ending torture of questioning in her head. Yet, Rachel continues trying to impress others every single day.
Your stories are quite well thought out and do hold my attention. #3 is my favourite – good characters, good conflict, well written. Well done!
Comment by theredpants — May 28, 2009 @ 9:27 am